Talk:Chapter 1 (The Wrath of Francis)/@comment-46131869-20200619112916

I found this chapter to be a well put together read. Had a bit of a Scream feel, but felt more gritty. I honestly was expecting something in the vein of Agatha Christie, but what came of it was something more in line with Golden Age Slashers, and wasted no time getting to the punch, really nice. I feel that you have the tone set up nicely moving forward. The killer evokes enough mystery to grip future readers for sure. He also kind of reminds me of Cropsy from The Burning with his wardrobe.

Excellent job, Donald. F.D.