Talk:Chapter 2 (The Wrath of Francis)/@comment-46131869-20200619120022

I think you have the Carter family's dynamic pretty tight man. Also, I find the High School students to be well written, almost as if they're real people. It really does remind me of the social divide in high school too, I actually even had a friend like Chuck back then too (he also kinda reminds me of Trip from Detroit Rock City).

Definitely adding to the liveliness of the world here.

EXTRA PROPS FOR USING THE OUTSIDERS 🙂 I have a feeling that will be semi relevant later, if not it certainly serves as a nice commentary for Andrew and Scott.

F.D.