Talk:Chapter 1 (The Wrath of Francis)/@comment-28452294-20200426134114

I think I remember this. It's nice to see the little prologue/Riverdale-esque opening make a reappearance. I'm glad you're doing the script format again. To be honest, I prefered your stories in script form as that format is the one you write the best stories with. Hillary and Benny sond like an interesting couple. Predicting that they are the opening kills. They seem like nice people. They're gonna have sex and then die, that's my prediction. Ah look, they're shagging; Basically confirms they're about to die.

Whoops, they get interrupted by a blasted video call. I think they're going to regret missing that call. Being watched as the have sex by an unknown figure. Not creepy at all lol. So it was their first... and last time. Yup, they're gonners. Welp, something’s happened. He’s been rendered unconscious by who I presume is the person who watched their hot and steamy sex. I’m guessing it was Francis.

Ooo, I’m feeling this opening scene to be very remininicent of Scream, but with major differences. So I was right; it was Francis who called her! And he’s tied Benny to a chair? Hillary recognises Francis? It’s cool to know they have a past together. I’m guessing the new Francis is a relative of the late Francis. Poor Hillary, being stabbed. Rest in piece, Benny and Hillary.

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It’s good to be back donald!